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Weekly we are given an invitation to write a six-sentence story using the word prompt from GirlieOnTheEdge. This week the word prompt was “Fly.” 

I had fun trying to write about as long a sentence as I could for each of the paragraphs today. And I enjoyed giving you, my faithful readers a glimpse of my childhood from kindergarten to sixth grade. What do you think?

Time flies…
but I can recall when I was a little girl of about five, my sister Sally and I walked from Fig Lane (where we lived in a lovely little two bedroom, one bath home with our parents) to P Street School in Newman, California where I was a happy little kindergartener.

Time flies, but I can recall… when I was six, my sister and I continued our daily walks (it was about a mile each way) to P Street School where I was a very happy, very outgoing first grader in Mrs. Awe’s classroom, my favorite primary grade teacher who kept in touch with me for the rest of her life, even after our family moved away.

Time flies, but I can recall… when I was seven, my dad quit his job as a mechanic at Newman Garage and he sold our lovely little two bedroom house on Fig Lane and we moved into an old house next door to my paternal grandmother, about five miles out of town.

Time flies, but I can recall… when I was eight, we moved to a remote house twenty miles from anywhere except the stinky Tallow Works that my dad owned with three sorta relatives who also had old houses moved onto the remote property and my sister and I walked about two miles to the bus stop every morning to go to Crows Landing’s Bonita Grammar School where Mrs. Yetter (who was almost bald and looked as old as Methusalah) was my 3rd grade teacher.

Time flies, but I can recall… when I was nine and ten we still lived out there in the sticks by the smelly Tallow Works and we still had that long walk to the bus stop every morning – and walked back at the end of the day – but my life was much better because Mrs. Horwedel was my 4th and 5th grade teacher and she was a wonderful square dancer who taught us all to square dance and she let me be the “caller” – – – I was in 7th heaven!

Time flies, but I can recall … when I was eleven and twelve Mrs. Marlow was my teacher and she let me fly to my highest potential by recognizing and rewarding my talents by letting me go every day during spelling time (because I didn’t need it) to the kindergarten where I volunteered to help the teacher … and learned early on that I wanted to be a teacher, too, someday.

Love, JanBeek
Smile! Aren’t they adorable?

Comments on: "6 Sentence Story -Prompt: “Fly”" (25)

  1. Anonymous said:

    So, the connection to the prompt, was either time flies, or the symbiotic relationship between the tallow plant and the many species of flies in the genus Musca

    • Yup, flies were a numerous nuisance at the Tallow Works … but I decided not to go there with this story even though that’s more than likely why my mind went there! Thanks for the prompt to edit my entry and add that connection… time flies. It works!

  2. That was a beautifully told remembrance of your happy childhood. In my mind I imagine the untold concerns of your family. Something was going on, but it did not stop the blessings from flowing.

  3. it’s nice to have such good memories of one’s childhood, and lucky that you had an educator who inspired you to teach!

  4. so cute baby 👍

  5. Congratulations on making the prompt word an abbreviation and the sentences lengthy but not prolix

  6. Time does fly. I marvel at recalling memories of childhood with my sister and realizing we didn’t see things the same way. It was fun to get a glimpse of little Jan and some of the things that God used to mold her into the loving person she is today.

  7. Wonderful, Jan!!

  8. Delightful, Jan! How amazing and wonderful your first grade teacher stayed in touch with you. It’s not often teachers know how positive an impact they may have had on a child.

    • Yes, her example has impacted my life. I have a 1961 1st grade student with whom I have stayed in touch all these years and several from a 1970’s kindergarten. Facebook facilitates connections wonderfully!🥰👌🏽Thanks, Girlie, for your comment.

  9. My oh my but you have an amazing memory, ma! It was fun to read about your childhood memories. Thank you for sharing!

  10. It sounds like a fascinating and amazing childhood.

  11. I love this Jan. Such cute memories to revisit!

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